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Breaking and Capturing by =GimpyKitty:iconGimpyKitty:



Can I fly away with you
Spread my wings and soar
To the far away land
Where you and I belong

The skies are vast
the reflection in your eyes
draws me in
pulls me deeper into you

What if I told you I loved you
What if I told you I cried
If I held out my hand
Would you place yours in mine?

This procession down the main street
Draws a large crowd
Searching for your face
But your not here

Your soaring on your beautiful wings
Far away from reality
Breaking hearts and capturing hearts
A fallen angel, wings still intact.

If you asked me to fly
I would jump off a cliff
And hope to God that I grow my wings
Before I hit the ground

What if I told you I loved you?
What if I told you I cried?
If I held out my hand
Would you place yours in mine?

A feather lands at my feet
You're inviting me up
Not sure if I have the strength to make it up
Make it to you.

What if I told you I loved you?
What if I told you I loved you?
What if I told you I want you?
If I held out my hand
Would you pull me up?

I'm asking.



I'm asking.



I love you.
©2008-2009 =GimpyKitty
:icongimpykitty:

Author's Comments

I wrote this in the spring, I believe. Kind of a one shot that I never went back to after putting it up here. I've made a few changes and I like it now.



I was in a good mood when I wrote this.

(c) Katie Gallant

Edit I changed a few words and decided to ask you all to read this and give me feedback. I know its an old work, but its one of my best, I feel.

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:iconrainwisher2:
I like this. I wouldn't be apologising for grammatical errors, because it flows really well. Nice job!
:icongimpykitty:
Thank you very much. :] It is quite appreciated.

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Makka na Ito

Founder of #gaze-rock
:iconpipshunsai:
nice ^^ sounds like a good song if u made it into one
:icongimpykitty:
Thanks. :] It was kind of written with a "song" type in mind, so I'm glad you noticed that.

:]

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Makka na Ito

Founder of #gaze-rock
:iconpipshunsai:
should I use it then and dedicate it to u?
:icongimpykitty:
haha you could if you wanted to, but not dedicate it to me, credit me as the writer. Obviously. :] Otherwise I would sue your ass for stealing. : D

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Makka na Ito

Founder of #gaze-rock
:iconpipshunsai:
hahaha ok ^^
I would really like to use it though...its really good.
It'll be sad to let a good lyric to go to waste
:icongimpykitty:
haha. Maybe I'll turn it into a song one day. :]

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Makka na Ito

Founder of #gaze-rock

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